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This is an alternate version of a shot I previously posted in color.

Thank you for the :+fav:s :hug:

Vancouver
BC, Canada

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March 2, 2012
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Canon
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Canon EOS 60D
Shutter Speed
2/1 second
Aperture
F/11.0
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
November 30, 2011
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Adobe Photoshop Elements 8.0 Macintosh
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The bridge is very impactful and dominates the scene, but I found myself wanting to see more of the cityscape (the buildings) on the far shore, especially on the left side of the picture. I think it would have given it more balance of composition.

As it is the bridge is the main focus, so then the buildings are almost distractions -- if you wanted to just show the bridge, you could crop out or eliminate the rest. But I think minimizing the bridge a little and showing more of the city would give the impression of the bridge actually GOING SOMEWHERE, giving more meaning to the picture as a whole.

I love all of your photos, though -- the blue as well as the black&whites. Such a distinct feel to them!
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*feigenfrucht Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This critique was brought to you by *feigenfrucht from :iconthesp0t:

Dear Valdemar, thanks a lot for submitting your picture to our critique folder and I will try to give you a feedback on your beautiful picture. I like the blue colors which are showing indeed a night blues. Not only because of the color, you have given also a feeling of this blues which could be come while being alone by night. I'm not a great fan of frames, but it supports your idea of the panoramic view. Now I have looked a little bit longer onto your picture and I get the feeling something distracts my eyes and I expect this is the left part of the picture. If I have done this shot, I expect, I would have cuted this part away ... or maybe not. :-) For sure it's the question what you want to point to and maybe you want more showing the reflections of the city and bridge and not the bridge itself. And I expect as viewing your series of the city night pictures you want to show the whole scenery :-) I think about the technical quality isn't much to write - it's great. So hopefully you like my feedback and my personal thoughts about your picture.
Have a great weekend :wave:
Greetings
feigenfrucht
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*Val-Faustino Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're the second person who's mentioned
the left side of the shot, you may have a
good point, but I guess I was being greedy
with all the eye candy :D If I ever re-post
this shot in another tone maybe I'll give it
a try. Thanks very much for your critique :hug:
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*feigenfrucht Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You are very welcome :hug:
Indeed your picture is a great eye candy and this was only a personal suggestion. Maybe not that wrong because I'm not alone with this. But I understand you fully :-)
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Mood: Love ~sevenxlives Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
great sentences.
This looks really totally beautifully. >w<
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*Val-Faustino Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks very much :hug:
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:iconperfection-aint-me:
:squee: I love bridges!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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*Val-Faustino Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Me too :D
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:iconperfection-aint-me:
teehee that are awesome! XD
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~wishingdreams Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is something
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*Val-Faustino Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :hug:
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